EDIT 3 - BUSINESS CARD -
I definitely prefer to have my name on the white back ground. I would prefer my name to be centered and a bit larger than current. Also Under my name I want my profession(financial planner) in smaller writing.
* Then mobile number underneath.(with space)* Then email underneath(with space)
then other details at the bottom of the card in small print, but clearly visible and readable( maybe same font as the title of financial planner)
'don't keep me a secret' - try the colour red, but also in primary colours. Also For the back of the card. Have the logo centered then in between a corner have the 'don't keep me a secret.
Also I want to have the words(including quote marks and then try a design without quote marks.
The other business card name we require is 'Wade Riley' and job title of 'Client Manager'
EDIT 2: our slogan has recently changed. please see slogan above^
EDIT: update - We are moving towards having the circle logo that has intercepting moving parts(different colours) . We would like to potentially see what the logo would look like with 'HSA' included or without it( to use as a watermark).
We are hopeful to find a logo that looks good with the HSA included in the circle and the text not included. Please PM us for a further explanation.
1 - The HSA eps is the current logo that we are using atm and the black colour is just out of date and we need a more modern look.
2 - we had two mock designs from Fiverr, but were not happy with the loose design. Wehn I say loose design I mean that some of the letters connected, and the 'H' had a flap on it which looked weird.
Our goal is to look like a modern and relevant financial planning company that targets customers from 30-50.
The competitor design image is from a company that uses simply displays. Also the display aren't logos we really like the feel it gives.
The Logoldea2 was taken from the 99Design website, we both liked how the business cards could sit next to each other and look very modern and connect from front and back.
Ideally we want a logo that will mainly have a white background. We want the silver only to have a small impact.
Black was our main colour before and I'm now sick of it but still want it incorporated. I want the blue to have a modern feel, and the silver complement it. The black might be used to strengthen the image, but I'll really leave that up to you on the deisgn level.
Thanks for submitting the work and I look forward to going through the design.