We'd like to take our attached concept design to a professional level, for use in publication and magazine printing. First, the icons on the left arrow represent each industry we are marketing to with our customized coatings. However, these icons aren't as professional looking as we'd like. Either higher quality design than clip art, your own design, or actual pictures would look more professional.
Second, we wanted to highlight how our coatings are environmentally friendly solutions, but the giant recycling logo in the middle of the box doesn't look too polished.
Third is the concept we want to build off of. We listed some SSPC "highlights" within that modified logo on the right side of the ad. This is an idea to either finish or build off of, and the bullets are some unique competitive offerings.
Fourth, I put the three paragraph blurb at the bottom of the ad to go into more detail on our differentiation from competitors. But presenting it like this seems a little crowded and unprofessional.
Finally, the banner at top and bottom of the ad is the nice aesthetic look of a finished ad we want to reach, but the slogan needs to be changed from "We coat, you corrugate" to "We coat...you corrugate", and the PO box in our address has to be changed from 95 to 650.